2015年12月1日 星期二

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With the progress of technology, cellphones are commonly used in everywhere. We can see people swipe the cellphones at anytime. While taking a bus, waiting for the train, and students even use them while taking courses. However, cellphones bring out problems at the same time. Such as health problem, and sometime may let students get a bad grade. Nowdays, people cant live without cellphones. When someone swipe the cellphone at anytime, we can call him or her ‘’ Smart phone addicts ’’. Although cellphones bring out a lot of advantages, but also cause many bad problems. When you use cellphone for a long time, you should take a break. Dont be a smart phone addict.

8 則留言:

  1. I like this essay because I think cellphones are becoming more important in my life.

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  2. Your essay is good. Cellphone is very important to me, I can't live without cellphone. Haha !

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  3. Your essay is good. Cellphone is very important to me, I can't live without cellphone. Haha !

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  4. I love your essay~~~~~~
    you are a beautiful girl

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  5. leave your cellphone along!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. leave your cellphone along!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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